到了蘇格蘭的時候，那邊的湖附近有很多霧，之後聽到關於尼斯湖怪物的特徵，

到了蘇格蘭的時候，那邊的湖附近有很多霧，之後聽到關於尼斯湖怪物的特徵，Tom有點害怕。還有那邊不管是男生或女生，都會穿kilt,然後吹著bagpipes，Tom也在那裡玩的很愉快

結果 (英文) 1:

To Scotland, there was a lot of fog near the side of the lake, after hearing about the characteristics of the Loch Ness monster, Tom a little scared. There are over there, whether boy or girl will wear a kilt, and then blowing bagpipes, Tom was there very happy to play

結果 (英文) 2:

When we got to Scotland, there was a lot of fog near the lake, and then Tom was a little scared to hear about the lochness of Loch Ness. And there's a guy or a girl who wears a kilt and blows the bagpipes, and Tom has a good time there.

結果 (英文) 3:

When he arrived in Scotland, there was a lot of fog near the lake over there. Tom was a little scared when he heard about the characteristics of the monster in nice lake. Besides, boys and girls over there would wear kilts and blow bagpipes. Tom also had a good time there