但我覺得有一點美中不足的是Newjeans的周邊禮盒要用抽獎活動才可以

但我覺得有一點美中不足的是Newjeans的周邊禮盒要用抽獎活動才可以拿到，如果像麥當勞兒童餐的形式，把玩具換成周邊禮盒，我認為這樣可以提升購買率和好感度。

結果 (英文) 1:

But I think there is a slight flaw in that Newjeans' peripheral gift boxes can only be obtained through a lottery. If the toys are replaced with peripheral gift boxes like McDonald's children's meals, I think this can increase the purchase rate and favorability.

結果 (英文) 2:

But I think one drawback is that Newjeans' peripheral gift boxes can only be obtained through a lottery. If we replace toys with peripheral gift boxes in the form of McDonald's children's meals, I think this can improve the purchase rate and popularity.

結果 (英文) 3:

However, I think there is a fly in the ointment that the surrounding gift boxes of Newjeans can only be obtained by a lucky draw. If toys are replaced with surrounding gift boxes in the form of McDonald's children's meals, I think this will improve the purchase rate and goodwill.