在得知他其實是星二代，但卻靠自己的努力做音樂。這使我開始欣賞他。

在得知他其實是星二代，但卻靠自己的努力做音樂。這使我開始欣賞他。

結果 (英文) 1:

After learning that he was actually the second generation of Star, he made music by his own efforts. This made me start to appreciate him.

結果 (英文) 2:

After learning that he is actually a second generation of stars, but on their own efforts to make music. This made me begin to appreciate him.

結果 (英文) 3:

Knowing that he is actually the second generation of stars, but he does music by his own efforts. It made me appreciate him.