我朋友已經寄出了，麻煩你在注意一下包裹，謝謝收到後通知我，可以直接寄包

我朋友已經寄出了，麻煩你在注意一下包裹，謝謝收到後通知我，可以直接寄包裹給我了

結果 (英文) 1:

My friend has already sent it. Please pay attention to the package. Thank you
for notifying me when you receive it. You can send the package directly to me.

結果 (英文) 2:

My friend has sent it, please you pay attention to the package, thank you.
I'll be notified when I receive it and you can send me the parcel directly.

結果 (英文) 3:

My friend has sent it. Please pay attention to the package. Thank you
Let me know when you receive it. You can send me the package directly