但希望在報告的時候，聲音能夠大聲些，翻譯的部分有些句子感覺需要再翻譯的

但希望在報告的時候，聲音能夠大聲些，翻譯的部分有些句子感覺需要再翻譯的恰當點，才會比較符合故事的意思。

結果 (英文) 1:

But I hope in time of the report, the sound can be louder, translated part of some sentences need to feel right point of translation, will be more in line with the meaning of the story.

結果 (英文) 2:

But i hope that when reporting, the voice can be louder, the translated part of some sentences feel the need to re-translate the appropriate point, in order to be more in line with the meaning of the story.

結果 (英文) 3:

But I hope that when reporting, the voice can be louder, and some sentences in the translated part feel that they need to be retranslated properly, so that they are more in line with the meaning of the story.